HELP HELP!!!!

ljudi znam da je ovo malo glupo al et... treba mi pomoc za shkolu... da
budem precizniji radim esej iz engleskog (ili pismenu vjezbu kako
ocete...). Ako neko na ovom forumu zna extra engleski da mi
prekontrolishe sledeci text:



My favourite Celebrity



James Hetfield

-In this essey i will write about James Hetfield. He is a frontman of the band Metallica. Here is his autobiography.

-James Hetfield is born in 3rd August 1963. He was born in Los Angeles.
James play guitar and sing for band called Metallica. He have blue



eyes and blonde hair. His family were German descent. His father Virgil
Hetfield was truck driver, and his mother Cynthia was light opera
singer.



James parents died from cancer, and as a memory on them he wrote
several songs like: "Mama Said", "Dyers Eve", "The God That Failed" and




"Untill It Sleeps". He started to playing guitar when he was fourteen
years old. Bands like "Black Sabbath", "The Beatles", "Queen", "Led



Zeppelin" and "Thin Lizzy" had a major influence on him. Hetfield formed his first band called Obsession.

-Here is something about his life in "Metallica" band.

In the middle of 1990 he recorded a single "Nothing Else Matters". He
also recorded duel solos with Kirk Hammett (the drummer of "Metallica")




like "Master of the Puppets", "Orion", "One" and others. He hat three
degree burns on his left hand, and he couldnt play guitar for four
weeks



durning opening album "Fade to Black". As a memory on that he tattoed
his left arm. On his left arm he tattoed flames. Durning the recording
of



the St.Anger album he went on rehabilitation for Alchocolism. Alcohol
had long been a problem for Hetfield. Music press called his band



"Alcoholica".

James Hetfield like skating, snowboarding swimming, jet-skiing, working
in his garage customizing cars and motorbikes. His favourite football



team are Oakland Raiders. James like to collecting guitars, and he
enjoys to working on classic automibiles. His favourite cars are '55
Chevy Bel



Air and "The Beast". His wife name is Francesca. James and Francesca
have 3 chieldern. He recorded many studio albums like "Kill'em All",



"And Justice For All", "Load", "ReLoad", "Ride the Lightring",
"St.Anger", "Master of The Puppets" and others. His most popular
singles are



"Jump in The Fire", "Frantic", "Nothing Else Matters", "St.Anger", "Welcome Home (sanitarium)", "Sad But True", and others.

-I like Metallica. They have very good songs, and i like metall music.
I was writing about James Hetfield, becouse i thing that he is the best
singer



i've ever heard. If you have time just listen some of his songs, and i hope that you will like them.





hvala u naprijed



ps. sam sam ga pisao... mislim da je dobar... ajd da cujem komentare od drugih.. da vidim od prilike shta bi mogao dobiti

I think you're EXCELLENT lol

Ne, ozbiljno. Mozda ne znam perfektno engleski, ali dosta znam. Mislim da je ovo sve ok

E pa dobar je.... samo sto mnogo koristis ovo him, he, njegovo ime... mislim da bi trebao to malo da smanjis.. a posebno ovde:

Citat :

-James Hetfield is born in 3rd August 1963. He was born in Los Angeles.
James play guitar and sing for band called Metallica. He have blue
eyes and blonde hair. His family were German descent. His father Virgil
Hetfield was truck driver, and his mother Cynthia was light opera
singer.

Epa to je moje mislenje a sad ti radi kako otjes

Pa brate bolje lichne zamenice nego stalno ime..
@ Moonbyt3
Owako znam engleski (mozda neznam jedno 100) reci ... Super goworim Engleski procitao sam i dobro a da ti nije malo dugacko??

ma nije ba

jest da je trebalo 7-10 recenica u glavnom dijelu... ali shta da napishem o tako perfektnom covjeku??

ne stvarno... to je znachi ono sazeto.. i drago mi je da vam se svidja

e vidi, nebi da se kurciram al jbg znam engleski zesce dobto, ucim ga od 4te godine,a jos + sam celo jedno leto proveo u Americi, gde sam usavrsio svoje znanje...
evo malo ispravki:
My favourite Celebrity



James Hetfield

-In this essey i will write about James Hetfield. He is frontman of the band called Metallica. Here is his autobiography.

-James Hetfield was born on 3rd August 1963. He was born in Los Angeles.
James plays the guitar and he also sings for a band called Metallica. He has blue
eyes and blonde hair. His family were German descent. His father Virgil
Hetfield was a truck driver, and his mother Cynthia was light opera
singer.
James parents died from cancer, and as a memory of them he wrote
several songs like: "Mama Said", "Dyers Eve", "The God That Failed" and
"Untill It Sleeps". He started to play guitar when he was fourteen
years old. Bands like "Black Sabbath", "The Beatles", "Queen", "Led
Zeppelin" and "Thin Lizzy" had a major influence on him. Hetfield formed his first band called "Obsession".

-Here is something about his life in "Metallica" band:

In the middle of 1990's he recorded a single "Nothing Else Matters". He
also recorded duel solos with Kirk Hammett (the drummer of "Metallica")
like "Master of the Puppets", "Orion", "One" and many others. He had third
degree burns on his left hand, and he couldnt play guitar for four
weeks durning opening album "Fade to Black". As a memory on that he tattoed
his left arm. On his left arm he tattoed flames. During the recording
of the St.Anger album he went on rehabilitation for Alchocolism. Alcohol
had been a major problem for Hetfield.The press called his band "Alcoholica".
James Hetfield likes skating, snowboarding, swimming, jet-skiing, working
in his garage customizing cars and motorbikes. His favourite football
team is Oakland Raiders. James likes to collect guitars, and he
enjoys the work on classic motorbikes. His favourite cars are '55
Chevy Bel Air and "The Beast". His wife name is Francesca. James and Francesca
have 3 chillderen. He recorded many studio albums like "Kill'em All",
"And Justice For All", "Load", "ReLoad", "Ride the Lightring",
"St.Anger", "Master of The Puppets" and others. His most popular
singles are:"Jump in The Fire", "Frantic", "Nothing Else Matters", "St.Anger", "Welcome Home (sanitarium)", "Sad But True", and others.
-I like Metallica. They have very good songs, and i like metall music.
I was writing about James Hetfield, because i think that he is the best
singer that i have heard off. If you have time just listen some of his songs, and i hope that you will like them.

probaj da ispravis sledece probleme: vidim da te buni Past Simple, i Past Continous, i takodje pokusavaj ubuduce da pravis manje pravopisnih gresaka... eto toliko od mene...

e hvala brate car si

a kad je pismeni ???

MoonByt3 ::

e hvala brate car si

znam

pawle ::

a kad je pismeni ???

odg. pls?

pawle ::

pawle ::

a kad je pismeni ???

odg. pls?

nije pismeni vec pismena vezba

u cemu je razlika?

pawle ::

u cemu je razlika?

Ima razlike

pa pismeni je kada pises hemijskom olovkom u vezvanku gde dobijas ocenu za svoj rad, a pismena vezba moze da bude samo bzvz sastav koji imaju za domaci da napisu... cista provera pismenosti...